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I could really use some help with this! Do the images work? Does it make sense to anyone but myself? Is the ending strong enough? Please review! Thanks guys! Every ...

I'm really not sure at all about this piece.... of course it makes sense to me but..... I'm not sure if anyone else will understand it. So please review! I ...

You don’t see what I see. Do you know that I can see them? No. Really. If you wanted, I could tell you what they looked like. I could describe ...

Oh, post part two, please post part two! You're right, it was bizarre, but fabulous. In a way it felt a little creepy. All grammar is correct, and I think ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it... I think I understand what you mean about those weird line breaks. I wanted a kind of separated effect. Sort of as if there ...

Through the ocean spilling from your eyes, can you laugh at the world’s sorrow, simply because it is so ironic? If you had a chance to never have existed, would ...

Once again, another brilliant story. This kept me so engaged the whole time that I forget to look for mistakes..... Scanning back over, I can't even find any! I know ...

Thanks for your help guys, i'll edit this as soon as I get the chance. I also had a question: 'r' seems a bit of a harsh rating for just ...

So you would leave us, would you? You would leave us here? Here on this swirling ball of self destruction, plummeting, flying, hurling, to a blank, white, screen of fear. ...

Something like this is the definition of short and sweet. Only 'sweet' probably isn't the best description word for this piece. Maybe magical. Wow. I know this isn't a helpful ...

This probably won't even be counted as a review, but I had to say how wonderful i thought it was anyways. It was so... What's the word? Beautiful. I love ...

Haha, it reminds me of a mother goose rhyme! Only a few suggestions: 1: You capitalize the first letter in every line, but I would leave the ones that are ...

Wow, there's not much to say about this; its so good. You said you felt it was a bit empty, but then again, that is part of your title and ...

They walked together, And he held her hand. Her heart bleeding... In Floods. mmmm... I'm not sure about this line. First of all, floods doesn't need to be capitalized. I ...

Wow 'titia. This is simply amazing. Amazing. Its so exciting! And creative! Ahh! It ended! I must read more! There's hardly any mistakes too. I don't know what else to ...